Tuesday, April 13, 2010

I LOVE MY FRIENDS

about my friends ... i guess they are nice wonderful beautiful awesome and the are also very special to me . they have always been there for me during my ups and downs my cloests friends evina jayaravin,cheyenne lee,louisa koh, and a few others . They have always helped me in my studies and in my personal matters . I am glad that i have friends like them in my class and school . They have always stood up for me and i love my friends . As for kevina jayaravin she has a bit of crazyness in her brain and she tends to forget a lot of IMPORTANT things . As for louisa she is pretty and lovely such that every one is her friend and she is also very knid . last but not least cheyenne she is funny and will always make us laugh by doinng weird and non sensical things . All three of them share one thing in common and that is they are gay people but very fun to be around with and to talk to the are me bestest friends and they are awesome people AND I LOVE THEM ! As for my other friends they are nice and kind too they are awesome people and they rock . I love all of you kisses to you !
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8 comments:

  1. maknae rules!April 20, 2010 at 9:08 PM

    Hello. Your story is interesting but you missed out alot of Capital Letters and please write in paragraphs to make it neater. Thank you! -Syalita-

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  2. LALALAND(:April 20, 2010 at 9:09 PM

    Sabrina, remember to use Capital Letters when starting a sentence. Spell errors and punctuations too. Interesting story about your best friends? I'm not your best friend? :( Haha just kidding. Good try!

    Sherilyn

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  3. samanthaApril 20, 2010 at 9:14 PM

    Nice writing, but where are your capital letters?

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  4. Pavitira'BarbieApril 20, 2010 at 9:15 PM

    hahahs,you very cool!!=.=
    MISTAKES:
    1)Start of the sentence not capital letter,
    2)The i should be capital I!
    3)After the words awesome and,and on the first sentence it should be they not the!?
    4)After a fullstop is capital leter!
    5)Spell kevina wrongly!(second sentence)
    6)Spell kind wrongly(7 sentence)
    7)Spell doing wrongly(8 sentence)
    8)I do not understand the endinng~

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  5. sabrinaApril 20, 2010 at 9:25 PM

    Wow thanks guys for all the wonderful comments *tsk**tsk*

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  6. kevinaApril 20, 2010 at 9:26 PM

    Sabrina dear, agree with Pavitra. Many spelling errors and lack of puntuation marks , no capitalisation. Work harder dear.

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  7. sabrinaApril 27, 2010 at 9:05 PM

    shut up kevina !!!!

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  8. THE SCRIBEMay 11, 2010 at 10:55 PM

    Please keep you assignment up to date. Where is your summary?

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